Some feedback so far.
- Art is nice and stands out fairly well from the standard styles.
- English needs polish, including some basics like mixing up he/she. It's comprehensible though.
- The skip button is good, but leaves players to pick between skipping everything, or waiting for each painfully slow page of text and then clicking to move on. Text really needs to show up immediately on click.
- Doesn't seem to be a way to end the BBQ game at the moment?
- The explanation for the BBQ game isn't at all adequate. "Pick then grill" does not convey "look at the sets of three items that appear at the bottom of the screen, then click and drag them in that order into the three boxes to the right, then click green to accept. Once you've made one or more, click the arrow to switch to the grilling screen, then look at the top right and drag a set of items down to start grilling them. After two colour changes, you need to click that skewer and drag it down to the matching set of three items at the bottom left, in order to get the points, and if you take too long it'll burn." None of that is obvious.
- As others have noted, after defeating an enemy, we cannot accept any bonuses (are we meant to be able to accept bonuses yet? if not, don't offer them) and cannot progress to another fight, only go back or look at the empty buffs list.
- Could use something to tell players when they've seen everything in the game so far, even if it's just a checklist.